006. an autobiography.
i cannot write cohesively about myself
i cannot write cohesively about myself
to save
my life.
i think i write too conventionally;
starting at the beginning and ending at
the end,
but never in the middle where
everything unfolds.
i like to think i’m an open person, pliable
with a little bit of coaxing. sweet and
to the point, like
a maraschino cherry.
starting at the beginning and ending at
the end,
but never in the middle where
everything unfolds.
i like to think i’m an open person, pliable
with a little bit of coaxing. sweet and
to the point, like
a maraschino cherry.
and yet, like an
artichoke,
i too have a pit of secrets that
i unveil like
a disintegrating fog before
closing off again.
(i hate to be
caught in the
spider web of
my vulnerability.)
but when it comes to happy things (see?),
i blush when i’m excited (though my
skin is a rendition of caramel) and
i rebelliously sway my hips during the
cupid shuffle and
my hobbies include watching cream
flirt with coffee. eyes that are
set ablaze in the morning are
smothered
with the embers of dusk.
i wish to
kiss
my future lover the way starlight composes
the sky:
the innermost city - barely there;
the suburbs - scattered and delicate;
the country - a passionate swell of illumination.
but until
then, i write from
the middle,
because i’ve already started
at
the
beginning.
finally really getting into writing again. feels good.
-kiss kiss kiss, affirmative-
finally really getting into writing again. feels good.
-kiss kiss kiss, affirmative-

i just kinda sorta really adore this, honestly. so, so good, jocee.
ReplyDeleteGah, I love this so much Jocce! Great writing.
ReplyDeleteyah, i think i just died. this is so good. the whole thing. no joke, i'm writing this in my journal so i can go back and read it. :)
ReplyDeletethis is too good. LOOOOVE!
ReplyDeleteYou're good.. at like, everything.
ReplyDeleteoh you are just so talented.... "watching cream flirt with coffee" is my most favorite!
ReplyDelete:P :P :P
ReplyDeleteI hate you.
:-)
WHY must you be SO INCREDIBLY AMAZING GAHHHHHHHH.
i hate to be
caught in the
spider web of
my vulnerability.
Really?
Did you really have to do that?
I want to come visit you in your creamer flirting with coffee, blazing eyes, maraschino cherry world.
AMEN. I'll just be creeping in the corner.. meeheh.
Deleteomg me too!
DeleteHAHA, i love y'all too. <3
Deleteooh, this is so good, girl. love this last part:
ReplyDelete"but until
then, i write from
the middle,
because i’ve already started
at
the
beginning."
Oh. My. Jocee:
ReplyDeletemy hobbies include watching cream
flirt with coffee. eyes that are
set ablaze in the morning are
smothered
with the embers of dusk.
*hugs* 'Nuff said,
~Jenny
writing is good.
ReplyDeleteand this was good.
this was REALLY good.
OH YES. Jocee is definitely getting into writing again...and the best she's ever been!
ReplyDeleteThis just might possibl;y be my favourite piece of writing I've read on your blog. Wow.
I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY ('cause this is really amazing stuff).
ReplyDeleteGOOD NESS GRACIOUS ME!
ReplyDelete"i like to think i’m an open person, pliable
with a little bit of coaxing. sweet and
to the point, like
a maraschino cherry.
and yet, like an
artichoke,
i too have a pit of secrets that
i unveil like
a disintegrating fog before
closing off again."
WHY CAN I NOT WRITE LIKE YOU?
if i did i think my mum would die of happiness...;)
#keepupthegoodwork #teachmehow #iwannabuyyourfirstbook
YOU are the sweetest. go eat a cupcake and dwell in your awesomeness.
Deletei don't have any. :( but thank you!
Deletep.s sorry for the random anon comment, my computer failed..
who are you.
ReplyDeleteno seriously.
this is so great.
"the way cream flirts with coffee"
xx.
Love it! And...I...WANT THAT TEACUP!
ReplyDeleteusually when i read someones writing i pick it to bits. there are bits that i don't like and bits that i do. BUT I TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY FELL HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH THIS WHOLE EXQUISITE THING. and you should take that as a compliment because i almost never use the word exquisite. i love the beautiful you that you are.
ReplyDeleteoh and how in the whole wide world could i not have noticed before that you're a lefty girl too? that's awesome :)
Dang, girl!! You have mad skill. This was a really enjoyable read! :)
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful || just like poetry.
ReplyDelete